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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2009-01-13 04:47 PM

Silent Screams echo,
piercing the night air.
Darkness falls,
remembering the day.

Who is it that remembers,
which one of the dark angels?
Who is it that is here,
which one of them will take me;
take me with them?

Surrender dark clouds,
remember the days you don't exist.
Shoot down the banner,
and release your army of hatred.

Who is the culprit?
who brought me here?
I have forgotten,
remind me of that night.
Who remembers the ones that don't exist?
Who can tell me what I've become?

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

1 posted 2009-01-13 05:43 PM

great poem.
midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2009-01-14 12:16 PM

Thank you, i appreciate you reading it.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

NormalitxButterfly
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since 2008-07-09

Posts 107

3 posted 2009-01-14 08:34 PM

^_^ i know what you mean

prize
Member

since 2008-11-21

Posts 116

4 posted 2009-01-15 08:07 AM

Hi there,

I love this poem and I especially loved reading the stanza:

Surrender dark clouds,
remember the days you don't exist.
Shoot down the banner,
and release your army of hatred.

Awesome lines with vivid imagery!

Def-init
Member

since 2008-12-03

Posts 186
Toronto, Canada

5 posted 2009-01-15 09:01 AM

"Surrender dark clouds,
remember the days you don't exist.
Shoot down the banner,
and release your army of hatred."

Nice.
Havent read many poems by yeah. But if you keep dropping that stuff man I will keep tuning in. Very nice.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

6 posted 2009-01-15 08:59 PM

Thank you, im glad to hear that you liked it.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

7 posted 2009-01-18 11:32 AM

Geez Emily!!! Is there ever a time that you write a crappy poem? Apparently not. lol. Great poem hun!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

8 posted 2009-01-18 11:25 PM

Wow. I'm new to this site, but when I saw this poem I knew I'd come to the right place. Beautiful poem XxForever.BrokenxX

On the seashore I espy the dreadful void under the tides

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

9 posted 2009-01-19 10:24 PM

Thank you, and welcome to pip.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

angelfacegurl
Member

since 2008-04-17

Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

10 posted 2009-01-22 11:24 AM

hey emily nice poem by the way!

i would like to talk to you sometime soon girly...

bri

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