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A Dark Soul
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A Dark Soul |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
A dark soul is ageless and reviled Eternal symmetry with God is in violation of the wild Consider me a zealot, the perfect picture for my ballad Shout it! A dark tone, like the geographical zone of Sierra Leone With no home, where little Sarah's alone with no phone I was born to be real, my spit... bacterial. Fearin' yall? Never an Achilles heel, In my hood, Dumbass's steal! So I got a gat made from 'Damascus Steel' laugh at tuff talk from the passenger's in an automobile! See, I’m a glutton, a roman with javelins, leavin’ bodies in oceans Souls in abyss's, a righteous act from the back of griffins. Just cruel like after Stalin had words spoken Drop bombs like the airmen, never taken a dive like a WW2 Asian My soul's on a skillet looking like bacon, the perfect diction Go underground and start a nation that mirrors Zion. Hunting poets like Natives with the Bison, Cut you down and get twice as much at the auction I see all vermin, like terrorist Arabs wearing turbans I'm a titan with a spine larger than any Spartan Leave ya with hands around the neck that tighten. Beefin' at me will take its toll, man. So back track and save your token My skin's flame retardant, Like hood-scum at night, I laugh at these Hoodlums fright My hex is real; the appeal is tantric, straight fantastic Where would you seek a victim? A fan asked it! The thickest thicket in Harlem is where I'm most fearsome! For fun I rhyme some... over the music of the spheres My vocals are disturbed; No surprise they please ears I'm on a power trip, Captain of a whaling ship My soul's a hollow point tip...damn I ain't heavenly divine I use verbal Holograms I use custom phrases in assorted arrangements In fact the only perceptual experience left Is my own cerebral death... |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I really enjoyed your write, and felt that if you did this in "pieces" it would make a great rap. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Interesting. I don't believe I've read anything by you before. Are you a rapper? Life's short. Think hard! |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
Excellent use of language and vocabulary in a whirlwind of random thoughts and images. Enjoyed the read very much! |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
Thx for the feed all. To answer the question yes I can rap. But I prefer to use more metaphor and complex thoughts. So to be classified as a "rapper" isn't the correct comparison Remember RAP = Retards Attempting Poetry!! I try to blend them both together. (Poetry+Rap) Stuff with a lot of meaning, visuals and substance. |
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Rocheal Junior Member
since 2009-03-15
Posts 25 |
Neat read!! Thanks for pointing me over here to read this.  |
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