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Open Poetry #43
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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
Posts 117


0 posted 2008-12-31 08:17 PM



What is the world to you?
I want to help you keep it safe
Ill do it at any cost to make sure it won’t stop

I want to fly with you
I want to find you
I want to hear your heart rush

Keep walking in different paths
Move to where you feel like it will last
Don’t feel like you have to surrender

I want to make you feel the same
I want to feel like a lucky man
I want to show you everything I am

Can I talk to you about anything?
Or do you want me to just turn away?
All I want to say is I won’t let you down

What’s your name?
Why can’t I learn
I don’t have much to hide from you
Would you tell me everything?
Last night I was dreaming of you
But you left me out on an old porch
Now I’m closing out the last time I saw you
And I can’t turn back
I wish I could find you
Ill spend everything I got on you

You’ve never left my head
I keep hoping you’re back
So I can see you one last time
Please god let her be coming back

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ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
1 posted 2009-01-02 03:19 PM


Enjoyed this piece.  From a woman's point of view I thought it was very warm and loving.  Keep up the good work.
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