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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Borrowing a Few... What is it that was once seen, for it must have disappeared. No longer are there telling signs since life has interferred. Time has passed, more than it should. I wait the New Year's begin, reflecting now the moments of a newer me within. "A rose, a tear, a stone" in thought, "dreams she has not seen". Pages out of tell tale books, wondering the mean. It's just a cry of war time fears "the flesh of hurt", the kiss from one another to be denied, these words, not to dismiss. For beauty is, as beauty does though meaningless sometimes. Tomorrow is another day to seek the world of rhymes. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Howdy, M. I enjoyed this poetic weaving of truisms! "reflecting now the moments of a newer me within." ~ Yes, I find myself doing that as well with the approach of the new year. "Tomorrow is another day to seek the world of rhymes." ~ and may you continue to write them! May all your dreams be manifested in the coming new year!  Warm hug, Linda  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Maureen This is so easy to slip into and make the reader reflect on her/his own life and YES do some borrowing......Sometimes it's a must! Just super! Take care Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Maureen, this is very cute and I enjoyed the way you wove in those titles. Perfectly rendered expectations. All the best for the New Year, dear Poetess! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful and delicate. enjoyed it. Times has passed; more than it should very beautiful write, make think a lot. yann |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - did I ever mention to you that you are one talented writer. Wish you the best, as always... BC |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the way you've woven in imagery from other poems. For me, life on the blue pages is a harmonious blending, creating a rich tapestry of shared and renewed thoughts and emotions. Nicely done, Maureen. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Linda, I don't dream much anymore, but I do pray for better times for all. ethome, well I started out with a poem about myself but then some titles caught my eye and helped me complete the poem. Thank you for stopping by. Margherita, sometimes when my mind is overwhelmed I use others' thoughts to help express myself. Thank you. yann, nice of you to stop and respond Thank you. BC - did I ever mention to you that you are such a wonderful caring friend? (and that I miss you when not around) Midnitesun,thank you. Yes, I am often inspired by the words of others especially when I need that "pick me up". Wishing everyone a happier and healthier New Year. M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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