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Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

0 posted 2008-12-26 12:05 PM

Just the girl next door

So sick of listening
To the sound of my own tears
I try to hide my emotions from the world
But i cant hide them from you

Every now and then
I try just a little bit harder
But it doesn't heal the pain of knowing
You don't see me that way

As my night tears start to form
The morning dew on the ground
And the flowers fill the air with fragrances
That fills my head with the scent of you

My troubled heart
Is still in the dark of my sorrow
You only choose me when you are hurting
Why don't you see me, hold me, chose me,

But you don't see my saddened eyes
Blurring with tears
As again my heart becomes shattered
Into thousands of little pieces

Being consumed by darkness
Loosing all hope
Of your arms to hold me together
I once again fade into the shadows

Now i have to see you In the arms of another
And my heart is broken once more
Will i just be the best friend for ever
Just the girl you grew up with
From next door

Annie 12-11-2008

SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

1 posted 2008-12-26 12:47 PM

You only choose me when you are hurting. I love that line, too many times it feels people are like that. They don't notice you until they're lonely or broken and no one else is there for them except you... Because you always cared for them. I liked this write. Good job.

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

2 posted 2008-12-26 06:41 PM

Thank you..

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-12-26 07:09 PM

Enjoyed...James

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2008-12-26 10:31 PM

Yo dear Anniepimm,

I'm afraid this all rather runs together.

Always capitalize your first person singular pronouns.

Bobby

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2008-12-26 10:57 PM

Anniepimm - written with many emotions, felt them as I read this write. Wish you the best...

BC

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2008-12-27 12:21 PM

Reminds me of the old Eddy Arnold song "You Don't Know Me"

You have captured the sorrow of the situation so very well.....

Eric

you give your hand to me
and then you say hello
and i can hardly speek
my heart is beating so

and anyone can tell
you think you know me well
but you don't know me

no you don't know the one
who dreams of you at knight
who longs to kiss your lips
and longs to hold you tight

to you i'm just a friend
that's all i've ever been
but you don't know me

chorus
i never knew the art of making love
though my heart achs with love for you
afraid and shy i let my chance go by
the chance that you might have loved me too

you give your hand to me
and then you say goodby
i watch you walk away
beside that lucky guy
and you will never know
the one who loves you so
no you don't know me

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

7 posted 2008-12-27 04:07 AM

Wish i could hear the music to that song the words are lovely, cant say that i have ever heard it before
Thank you all for your feedback

sarah 45
Member

since 2008-12-19

Posts 54

8 posted 2008-12-27 09:37 AM

Me liky, that's cool but I'll say 4get about him , if he doesn't you shouldn't eather

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

9 posted 2008-12-27 11:06 AM

I agree with you lol Thank you..

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2008-12-28 02:52 PM

Annie,

I'm catching up on my reading...so, a belated Welcome to Passions!!! Please,
check your email for a Very Special Welcome!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

11 posted 2008-12-30 05:12 PM

Thank you sunshine it,s beautiful

nourzihane
Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

12 posted 2009-01-07 04:59 AM

Dear Anniepimm

Thank you for your effort that you spend in the forum

I hope to see more from you
nice words to see it , wish to you all the best

. Waiting your next thread with our longing

Best regards & Good day

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

13 posted 2009-01-07 05:12 PM

Thank you I will endeavor to write more and better

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