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Just the girl next door

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Anniepimm
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0 posted 12-26-2008 12:05 PM       View Profile for Anniepimm   Email Anniepimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Anniepimm's Home Page   View IP for Anniepimm


Just the girl next door

So sick of listening
To the sound of my own tears
I try to hide my emotions from the world
But i cant hide them from you

Every now and then
I try just a little bit harder
But it doesn't heal the pain of knowing
You don't see me that way

As my night tears start to form
The morning dew on the ground
And the flowers fill the air with fragrances
That fills my head with the scent of you

My troubled heart
Is still in the dark of my sorrow
You only choose me when you are hurting
Why don't you see me, hold me, chose me,

But you don't see my saddened eyes
Blurring with tears
As again my heart becomes shattered
Into thousands of little pieces

Being consumed by darkness
Loosing all hope
Of your arms to hold me together
I once again fade into the shadows

Now i have to see you In the arms of another
And my heart is broken once more
Will i just be the best friend for ever
Just the girl you grew up with
From next door

Annie 12-11-2008

© Copyright 2008 Annie - All Rights Reserved
SlowlyFallAway
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Posts 279
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1 posted 12-26-2008 12:47 PM       View Profile for SlowlyFallAway   Email SlowlyFallAway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SlowlyFallAway

You only choose me when you are hurting. I love that line, too many times it feels people are like that. They don't notice you until they're lonely or broken and no one else is there for them except you... Because you always cared for them. I liked this write. Good job.
Anniepimm
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Posts 549
England


2 posted 12-26-2008 06:41 PM       View Profile for Anniepimm   Email Anniepimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anniepimm's Home Page   View IP for Anniepimm

Thank you..
JamesMichael
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3 posted 12-26-2008 07:09 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...James
Robert E. Jordan
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since 01-25-2008
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4 posted 12-26-2008 10:31 PM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Yo dear Anniepimm,

I'm afraid this all rather runs together.

Always capitalize your first person singular pronouns.

Bobby
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


5 posted 12-26-2008 10:57 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Anniepimm - written with many emotions, felt them as I read this write. Wish you the best...

BC
ethome
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6 posted 12-27-2008 12:21 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Reminds me of the old Eddy Arnold song "You Don't Know Me"

You have captured the sorrow of the situation so very well.....

Eric

you give your hand to me
and then you say hello
and i can hardly speek
my heart is beating so

and anyone can tell
you think you know me well
but you don't know me

no you don't know the one
who dreams of you at knight
who longs to kiss your lips
and longs to hold you tight

to you i'm just a friend
that's all i've ever been
but you don't know me

chorus
i never knew the art of making love
though my heart achs with love for you
afraid and shy i let my chance go by
the chance that you might have loved me too

you give your hand to me
and then you say goodby
i watch you walk away
beside that lucky guy
and you will never know
the one who loves you so
no you don't know me
Anniepimm
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England


7 posted 12-27-2008 04:07 AM       View Profile for Anniepimm   Email Anniepimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anniepimm's Home Page   View IP for Anniepimm

Wish i could hear the music to that song the words are lovely, cant say that i have ever heard it before
Thank you all for your feedback
sarah 45
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since 12-19-2008
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8 posted 12-27-2008 09:37 AM       View Profile for sarah 45   Email sarah 45   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sarah 45

Me liky, that's cool but I'll say 4get about him , if he doesn't you shouldn't eather
Anniepimm
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since 12-26-2008
Posts 549
England


9 posted 12-27-2008 11:06 AM       View Profile for Anniepimm   Email Anniepimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anniepimm's Home Page   View IP for Anniepimm

I agree with you lol Thank you..
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


10 posted 12-28-2008 02:52 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Annie,

I'm catching up on my reading...so, a belated Welcome to Passions!!! Please,
check your email for a Very Special Welcome!



" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Anniepimm
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since 12-26-2008
Posts 549
England


11 posted 12-30-2008 05:12 PM       View Profile for Anniepimm   Email Anniepimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anniepimm's Home Page   View IP for Anniepimm

Thank you sunshine it,s beautiful
nourzihane
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since 07-10-2008
Posts 261
Algeria


12 posted 01-07-2009 04:59 AM       View Profile for nourzihane   Email nourzihane   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nourzihane

Dear Anniepimm

Thank you for your effort that you spend in the forum

I hope to see more from you
nice words to see it , wish to you all the best

. Waiting your next thread with our longing

Best regards & Good day
Anniepimm
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Posts 549
England


13 posted 01-07-2009 05:12 PM       View Profile for Anniepimm   Email Anniepimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anniepimm's Home Page   View IP for Anniepimm

Thank you I will endeavor to write more and better

  

 
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