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sams
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since 2008-12-25
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0 posted 2008-12-25 09:31 PM


I see you everywhere, yet you’re nowhere
Looking for you while you’re standing there
At high skies swimming on wings of air
Atop far plants beacons from holy flare
Strands from clouds extended your hair
Everything is you yet none would compare

Constantly trying to climb a missing stair
All failed to convey even a genuine tear
Talking to you once; is all I do really care
To let you know what I am; truly I swear
Sole chance pleading to tell the facts bare
Grievous story subsists within behind glare
To grasp the complexity just sit on my chair

From pure heart yours should never scare
Sacred love from someone that doesn’t err
Caring human your heart never to beware
I only need you and I am in total despair
Hopeless love is an endless pain to bear

Desire is never a factor in great love affair
Could only grow when earth becomes a lair
Based solely on admiring traits surely rare
Every move would show an exceptional flair
Your affable world was only hoping to share
Craving notion to share an infinite green pear

Breaking an innocent heart was indeed unfair
What went through a mind; fully I am aware
Not a matter of bold emotions or trying to dare
Still never shy and at whole world would stare
But it’s a private matter and none has an affair

I love you; mighty word longing always to blare
On acclaimed feast of love and at every square
Foundation for a structure; time can never wear
Is it much to mend a heart and human soul repair?
Sincerely asking a second thought; never to snare
After all not a doubt that we mirror a perfect pair.


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amusemi
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A State of Disarray
1 posted 2008-12-26 01:35 AM


One can sense the sorrow and aching plea in this....  Welcome, welcome to PIP.  Many are away for the holiday, but there are a great many poets...all with beautiful hearts.  Great first post...hope to see more.  kat  
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-12-26 08:19 AM


A very complex write, a multi-layered cake frosted with emotion.
Welcome to Pips!

Nan
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3 posted 2008-12-26 10:55 AM




Welcome to Passions in Poetry.  You'll find this to be a wonderful home within your home.  We have lots of great poets here who are happy to share with you.  This is a nice entree - We're looking forward to more.

Check your email for a special treat - and Happy Holidays..


Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
4 posted 2008-12-26 12:11 PM


Oh this is lovely i particularly liked this stanza

Breaking an innocent heart was indeed unfair
What went through a mind; fully I am aware
Not a matter of bold emotions or trying to dare
Still never shy and at whole world would stare
But it’s a private matter and none has an affair

It is my fave, very well penned,
Excellently written,
You can feel the emotion in it

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