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Open Poetry #43

never / enough / hands

shirtless
Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2008-12-23 12:32 PM

never
enough
hands
to drive
the final nail
and crucify
the self

so it hangs there
like a leaf
that survived autumn
and now flails
in winter wind

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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2008-12-23 12:45 PM

It's a good thing.

Then the hanging is suffice to sins recalled but the blame should be modified......Good work!

Eric

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

2 posted 2008-12-23 12:57 PM

I caught just the slightest bit of humor in this.
but maybe I'm just crazy.

I thoroughly enjoyed this.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

3 posted 2008-12-23 02:22 AM

Ouch...what a painful visual. Hope things get better! Happy Holidays...kat

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-12-23 03:01 AM

I think I caught a bit of humor (or sarcasm) in this too but I could be wrong.
Anyway, I like it very much.
Ida

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