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vandana
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0 posted 2008-12-22 05:58 PM





Like A Song

There once a written
Notes of a music
Played to our hearts
The notes that were written
Was like a song
to us
When we listen carefully
to the notes
of words
That has a meaning
of this music
We know
There was a song
That was never wrong
to hear
There was a long
Way to come to follow
The notes of love
It sounds like a song
to us
Like a song.......


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1 posted 2008-12-22 06:02 PM


Then a love song it truly must be, Vandana
Happy holidays, poet.

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2008-12-22 06:39 PM


"We know
There was a song
That was never wrong
to hear"

a very nice thought



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3 posted 2008-12-27 01:29 AM


Vandana,

I am glad that I didn't miss the music.  This is lovely.

Alison

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4 posted 2008-12-27 07:17 AM


Vandana

Lovely thoughts! Love has been compared to music and a song for centuries and you pen it well here.

Take care

Eric

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

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