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First Breath
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First Breath |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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First Breath if I could be any color it wouldn’t be my favorite for my favorite is red excitedly fun and bold but it would be something very calming and polite I wish I could be green with buds bursting softly the beautiful earth’s blanket to pull and wrap so cozy tender tips of branches of arms reaching always a perfect hue of innocence the shade of don’t leave stay the spinning way it makes your brain uncontrollably reel for I would remember it clearly even if I ever lost my sight I could recognize it, green the first breath of love |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a very sweet poem and i approve of your color choice. Joyce |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"green the first breath of love" lovely thought  M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a poetic way to describe green! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful title for the content......Love the reasoning here and the romance included. Eric |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That is an inspiring write my friend and your choice of green is a wise one. Green to me is the most beautiful color on earth, I was born in a part of the state where droughts were all to prevalent and the greatest sight was to see the whole country explode in a vista of green after drought breaking rains. Much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Helen, You can't get green Without blue and gold . . . John . |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Helen - I believe you would look stunning in red... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo daer Helen, I cast another vote for red. Wave that red banner proudly--comes the revolution. Love Bobby |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I would want to be red... blinding red. Helen, I see you green now.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Yes, green, good choice. red is a nice color but nature smiles in green. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am partial to the colour green, myself! ~ and especially after reading your lovely description of it. Surrounding you in a bubble of green Light for prosperity, healing, serenity, and new beginnings.  Linda |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
It is so much better to think of "green" as "the first breath of love" rather than the tradtional and lonely 'with envy' phrase...nicely done...and may you have had a Merry Christmas. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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