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The Kiss Of Consciousness

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ethome
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0 posted 12-22-2008 05:14 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Across the lake where trees meet the sky
Sunrise comes to fill my waking eyes.
In the old pine tree by the creaking dock
songbirds chime their feathered clocks
Into this moment tranquil filled
a murmmured whisper breaks the still.
I turn and look at your quivering face
as your dream comrades fade away
Your eyes open to my connection
your smile so full of recognition.
Then, right then, where eternities meet
your sunlit emeralds keep beckoning me
to open the passage through heart and mind
And slide into your arms one more time..


So I do and it's special again.    

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

[This message has been edited by ethome (12-22-2008 09:59 PM).]

© Copyright 2008 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 12-22-2008 06:48 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

"Then, right then, where eternities meet
your sunlit emeralds keep beckoning me
to open the passage through heart and mind
And slide into your arms one more time.."

a beautiful thought  to end my evening on here ~~

thank you,

M
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2 posted 12-22-2008 07:07 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

A lovely romantic write, Eric.
ethome
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3 posted 12-22-2008 07:08 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Hey Maureen nice to hear from you!
It's been a long time.

Thanks for visit.

Eric
ethome
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4 posted 12-22-2008 07:11 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Hi Midnite good to hear from you again....I appreciate the read very much....Tis a mellow time of year and so this thankful for love write....Just me I guess.

Eric
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5 posted 12-22-2008 10:38 PM       View Profile for LindsayP   Email LindsayP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LindsayP


Great post Eric, much enjoyed.

Lindsay
ethome
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6 posted 12-22-2008 10:40 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Thanks Lindsay glad you could find the time to drop in for a read....

Eric
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highways, & byways, for now


7 posted 12-22-2008 10:58 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

ethome - I always look forward to reading your writings, another one well done...

BC
Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 12-23-2008 05:07 AM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Yo Eric,

There you go son, sounds okay to me.

Bobby
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9 posted 12-27-2008 01:37 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Romantic and lovely.

A
ethome
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10 posted 12-27-2008 06:07 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Bill, Bobby & Alison thanks for dropping in and reading this....I really appreciate the kind comments!

Take care

Eric

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

2islander2
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11 posted 12-27-2008 01:20 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

delicate ans sensitive, a very enjoyable read.

yann
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Hey,before I wanna say thanks 4 reading my poem ,(appreciate it)...... really like ur writing too....
ethome
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13 posted 12-27-2008 02:06 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Yann and Sarah

Thanks for dropping in to read this love poem. I appreciate your comments...Have a great day

Eric
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14 posted 01-06-2009 04:04 PM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Enjoyed, Eric.
           Ida
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Eric...I sigh at this

wonderful!
 
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