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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-12-22 01:22 PM


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what way in town
is the wind—not blowing
in my face


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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-12-22 01:27 PM


John,

Nice Senryu.

Bobby

gilead
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2 posted 2008-12-22 02:32 PM


Wow! the power of words, it doesn't take a truckload for them to speak with the voice of thunder!

art

gilead
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3 posted 2008-12-22 02:37 PM


It reminds me of a conversation with my philosophy prof. long ago who told me during a trying time in my life, to "walk with the wind at your back." I remember replying, "What if the wind is blowing at you in all directions?"

art

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
4 posted 2008-12-22 11:12 PM


Coming from a very windy city I can say I absolutely agree and identify with this one...nice job!
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5 posted 2008-12-23 01:02 AM


John~
What a blow-of-words capture your thoughts in this wintry Senryu~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2008-12-23 06:05 AM


That's exactly how it was this weekend!

M

ethome
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7 posted 2008-12-23 06:40 AM


Some days there's no escape except through these words......Thanks for the reminder reflection.

Eric

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