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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 12-22-2008 07:59 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

hemingway afternoons, tails out shirts
and slow dirt too lazy for dust
just laying around on wrinkle wood
waiting to be artwork recycleing
a footprint perhaps from your funny shoes

you used to have those dove sounds around you
when you were contimplating adultraside
and you hated the feelings of confusion
especially with all the studying you did
but not reading between the lines much

until I wrote you poems on your palms
and kissed between your fingers one afternoon
out of a million other afternoons
that I wanted the rest of the story
and I guessed you did too but wouldn't cross

against the blinking red hand with a ring on


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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-22-2008 12:11 PM).]

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1 posted 12-22-2008 10:32 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"until I wrote you poems in your palms
and kissed between your fingers one afternoon
out of a million other afternoons"

you can write poems on me anytime

enjoyed this D
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 12-22-2008 12:12 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms suesea..but then we would get into trouble..thanks hon
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3 posted 12-27-2008 01:27 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Daark,

I think every woman who reads your poems would love them to be written to her.  You just have this way about you - and your poems reflect this part of you well.

Love this one lots.
A
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 12-27-2008 06:18 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

until I wrote you poems on your palms
and kissed between your fingers one afternoon

this is might fine writing Mr Daark.. thank you love and RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ethome
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5 posted 12-27-2008 06:38 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Well, she wouldn't engage in adultaside ( I love that!) she was an honest straighforward lady and wore her heart on her sleeve, pardon the cliche.

I'd just relax now..Rest the Hemmingway way...... Ya foller....

Now he lives in the islands, fishes the pilin's
And drinks his green label each day
He's writing his memoirs and losing his hearing
But he don't care what most people say.
Through eighty-six years of perpetual motion
If he likes you he'll smile then he'll say
Dark Stranger, some of it's magic, some of it's tragic
But I had a good life all the way.

Take care

Eric


Dark Stranger
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6 posted 12-27-2008 06:47 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms ali-san, thanks babe...the poems are written about only one woman..and she is all women at one time or another.  


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ms r&b, thanks babe
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Eric..cool tunes amigo...thanks for the snapshot
steavenr
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7 posted 12-28-2008 08:55 PM       View Profile for steavenr   Email steavenr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit steavenr's Home Page   View IP for steavenr

"slow dirt too lazy for dust"
"contimplating adultraside"
...just loved these word choices...nice write
Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 12-28-2008 10:01 PM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Yo Dark Stranger,

This is a very cool poem.  I like it loads.

Bobby
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9 posted 12-29-2008 05:00 AM       View Profile for Indigo   Email Indigo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Indigo

tracing her life line
his finger followed the curve
her story revealed.

Indigo
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10 posted 12-29-2008 08:59 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

steavenr, humble thanks guy

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rj, thanks amigo, much appreicated !!


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ms indi.
growing older together
they smiled as the content
of their maturity
melded dawn and evenings
into jello shaped horizons
Indigo
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11 posted 12-29-2008 06:58 PM       View Profile for Indigo   Email Indigo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Indigo

Mmmmmm... there's always room for jello.

Indi-
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12 posted 12-29-2008 07:54 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms indi...you read my mind (again)
Margherita
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13 posted 01-04-2009 05:48 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

quote:
you used to have those dove sounds around you



Incredibly well expressed...

Always a treat to read you and to absorb you, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita
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14 posted 01-05-2009 06:13 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ma mar, thanks babe
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