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Jill
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. How strange That rain Should come To this desert land And flowers Bloom Of course You know I want to See you Again In truth Even now At this Improper hour I’m really Unwilling To let you go For fear You’ll disappear How suddenly Easy to be In company As I sit here Listening To you carry on It’s all Your doing While I can feel This erstwhile Solitary man Begin to change . |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
though apparently intensely personal, I find this one cool write...love the part that spoke of that "erstwhile solitary man" and makes me wonder just who this Jill might be...don't know how I missed this earlier...Merry Christmas...thanks for sharing |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Of course You know I want to See you Again" Sometimes it isn't a weakness but just a longing... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Oh, to own the power of Jill. I love this piece. "late" |
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