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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2008-12-21 09:42 AM



You can't copyright
what was never written

your trees can't empathize
in perfect pitch
and your arrows can't land
spiked with poisonous theme

your dreams won't float
of dry sands
emancipated
by morning tide

your inner child won't misinterpret

and your heart wont fly
when he writes i love you
on the black slate
of nocturnal skies

you can't copyright
what was never written

Arise from your slumber !!
release the pen by your side.



[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-21-2008 10:25 AM).]

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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
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1 posted 2008-12-21 12:11 PM


Love that last line, and release we must the verse that arises inside. Enjoyed this message from your HeArt.
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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2 posted 2008-12-21 08:34 PM


inkedgoddess - releasing the pen without limits brings out the deepest words...

BC

steavenr
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Posts 4058

3 posted 2008-12-21 09:38 PM


"you can't copyright
what was never written"

...oh, how true--I so need this from time to time...thank you for sharing this...Merry Christmas

Alison
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4 posted 2008-12-27 01:21 AM


Hey, your message is heard - and I own the book so I know you are right.  

I like this one.

A

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2008-12-27 09:54 AM


quote:
your inner child won't misinterpret

and your heart won't fly
when he writes i love you
on the black slate
of nocturnal skies


Awesome visuals once again, dear Michele!

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
6 posted 2008-12-27 01:01 PM


A wonderful write, my heart has melt a few seconds, very touching and a deep inspiration.

yann

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows
7 posted 2008-12-28 01:13 PM




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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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8 posted 2008-12-30 11:58 PM


Very nice...James
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
9 posted 2008-12-31 08:49 AM


thanks for reading me
happy holidays to all of you nice people

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 posted 2008-12-31 12:44 PM


Yo dear Inkedgoddess,

Being penless in Piscataway beats being penniless in Piscataway.  This is a cute poem.

Love Bobby

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