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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2008-12-20 12:32 PM



Seeds

planning a garden
winter seeds
hunting flowers
playing with hues
blank paper tags
what will
belong
where
blues the edge of me
red middle anger
but in the shade
bleeding hearts



© Copyright 2008 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-12-20 12:21 PM


Yo dear Helen,

This is a nice garden poem.  Of course, I don't like gardens.  Gardens bring back bad memories.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2008-12-20 12:28 PM


1slick_lady - one red rose planted would be appreciated...

BC

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2008-12-20 05:25 PM


Hard to know where they will end up but the idea will come to life when they blossom.

Forget the blues line it will be wonderful then!! I can see it now.
Very enjoyable little excursion you take us on here.....

Eric

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2008-12-20 08:10 PM


I'll be a bench.

Y'want me to be a bench?



I mean, I'm always here anyway.

You do grow the most lovely poems.

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

5 posted 2008-12-20 08:54 PM


love the form this takes...it's as beautiful as the words you've crafted
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2008-12-21 04:51 AM


Interesting garden you planted, Helen.
                                 Ida

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2008-12-23 06:58 PM


I love this new one that has grown!


ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
8 posted 2008-12-23 09:54 PM



Dear Helen It sounds a nice combination  but if red represents anger don't plant it, for life is too precious to be angry. Happy Christmas Helen.

Lindsay  

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