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Consolation |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Consolation standing second consolation like that was the prize comfort of feeling what the space between rain drops where water doesn’t touch just a position following imperfection |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ohhhhhhhhhh...I need to find the music. I KNOW I HAVE THIS. ack  I wanna read this to the music. I'll be back. You'll be here, right?  Love you. Stay strong.  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
yes i am here |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Moonlight Sonata Changed my mind this is what I hear, do you hear what I hear? where water doesn’t touch Oh, I loved that! Whatcha hear K? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I apparently need 15 hours of sleep? and oh yes...I hear. I can't pick of favorite part though. Of Helen's poem either.   |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
just love the euphimism you use as an ending... "just a position following imperfection" a fresh look at second place...nice write |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
clever and thoughtful, enjoyed it after twice reading (didn't get it the first time) have a nice day, merry christmas yann |
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