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song of twit-twit twittery |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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No one not ONE has ever left his wife for me considering the odds of it meaning: the longevity of relationships which last I'd say I always started fast and hurt me on the gate. None of them got close to me some of them came near with words but no one ever tossed the nest every one sang me absurd songs, of twit twit twittery to the timing of their watch as if I were a moment, caught between responsibilities angled with the sun. I watched the waiter take your glass; I motioned just one more for me. He nodded and he asked if that would be added totally - "all of this on you?" I replied to him, "of course." praying I had two twenties and some thing to pay for your simplified goodbye. The waiter brought my glass of wine. I gave to him my twenty-nine pleading with my eyes... He told me that I was most kind and with two fingers to his lips "complimentary" he said leaving that tray tabled by my cigarette in signaled sighs wishing I oh wishing my pieces of my heart don't cry in public, so misunderstood: Someone might think that I care.. If I cried a tear for you. If were not such a fool staring at your empty chair... wishing for a fight. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is one of those writes where I don't know what to say...do I admit this brought a smile and a hearty laugh, do I try to console you by telling you that you dodged a real bullet...you don't want some guy that you are still picking the tab up for, or do I get real sincere, and wish the best for you...tell you what--I will let you decide...because they were all true while reading this very good write...really good writing lets the reader move through a plethora of emotions... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I made it up.  so....thank you!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - very nicely done, for just making it up. But I understand... BC |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It all comes from somewhere... thanks Bill! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
does art imitate life or does life imitate art? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Baby? If I knew I'd know what to do...  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
yes, and I still sit here unemployed and lawyerless (not for lack of looking either) CHICKENS HAVE GONE NORTH FOR THE WINTER roflmao WITH everything else Merry Christmas !!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sucks, don't it? Love you, tho, I do. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Your fine imagination is way too hard on yourself sometimes........Then again it makes for some smoky bluesy scenes that fit into the mellow regions of the cure reflections can bring. I felt the intensity of your fictitious situation and I loved the conflict! Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You're right, dear lady... It all comes from somewhere... and I found myself in more than a few lines of this... It should have been required reading for me long ago. *S* |
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