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dingusjr
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0 posted 2008-12-18 06:46 PM



The Anasazi knew him
As trickster and shaman
Painted and carved in stone.
A humpbacked flute player
With phallus and feathered headband.

If you walk these canyons
You may hear
His high and fluttery flute
Flowing soft beneath the wind.

You may see him in the shadows,
Humpbacked with his sack
Of seeds and songs,
Seeking shy maidens,
He brings blankets and babies.

Kokopelli still haunts these canyons.
Disguised now as a tourist
In shorts and sandals,
A digital camera in his pack.
He lingers at the edge of the tour group
And licks his lips as he looks at the ladies.


© Copyright 2008 Larry W. Allen - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
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1 posted 2008-12-18 08:19 PM


though I needed to look up kokopelli, (perhaps because I was hoping the heritage had Missouri roots--my home state)

loved this phrase especially:

"Disguised now as a tourist"...in its context, it works beautifully

wranx
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2 posted 2008-12-21 10:36 AM


Very nicely done.

*chuckling*

Its good to see others also write about the old gods....and whats become of them

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3 posted 2008-12-23 06:07 AM


A unique peak at one of my favorites, the sometimes scoundrel kokopelli. Love the way you put sandals on his feet and a camera in his backpack. LOL, yes, I have encountered that kokopelli on the trail.
ethome
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4 posted 2008-12-23 06:44 AM


He he this is good!
Some things just never change and that's the will of biological functions.

Eric

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5 posted 2008-12-23 03:48 PM


Excellent write!!! I enjoyed this very much!
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