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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-12-17 08:51 AM


you had painted your toes earlier
while I was busy polishing my shoes
and then we only walked in the sand
and laughed at our in common things

like the dust we wore so distinctively
and how kisses feel at first
before you can think back on them
while wanting them more again

and there was the sea shell you found
that fit into your navel like a gem
you wondered who would notice it too
at the ballroom when your gown was damp

and everything else seemed obvious
but you said you didn't mind the exposure
since you had already given everything to me
and what was left was just the residue

unless I wanted that too somewhere private


______________

daark


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amusemi
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1 posted 2008-12-17 11:56 AM


You've painted a stunning moment of "daark" romance.  Nice job, Sir Stranger.  
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-12-17 12:37 PM


ms muse...thank you lady friend for looking in the window at the video of tomorrow..
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with you
3 posted 2008-12-17 02:47 PM


I'd walk the beach with you anytime
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-12-17 05:36 PM


ms suesea...I would enjoy you on my arm...anytime..thanks babe
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5 posted 2008-12-26 08:53 PM


Dark One,

The beauty of your words make me smile.

ali-san

Margherita
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6 posted 2008-12-27 09:31 AM


quote:
like the dust we wore so distinctively
and how kisses feel at first
before you can think back on them
while wanting them more again



Delightful, dear D.! Must go grab the cat for a sweet kiss session ...

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-12-28 07:11 AM


ms ali-san, thanks babe


_______________


ms mar, thanks so much lady friend

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8 posted 2008-12-28 09:03 AM


thinking back in time~~


M

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9 posted 2008-12-28 12:20 PM


enjoyed
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