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vandana
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0 posted 2008-12-16 05:35 PM





Treasures

Once I had a dream
of finding treasures
A true treasures
That came from a treasures box
As I open this box
I saw jewels that was treasures
A long time ago
That was treasures
from my grandmother
The jewels I looked upon them
I found something precious
That I always wanted to keep them
In my heart
I look upon on those jewelry
That once my grandmother wore them
Now I keep them
In my treasure box
And I remember
those memories of my grandmother
In this precious box
Treasures.......

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2008-12-16 05:40 PM


And you yourself have become a treasure to so many of us here.  Enjoyed the read and nice to see you smiling in the blue pages.  
steavenr
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2 posted 2008-12-16 06:33 PM


the memories of a loved one are treasures indeed...nicely done...enjoyed
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2008-12-16 06:45 PM


*smile*

One of mine is a little music box with a red cardinal on it that sings when I take off the top...

good read

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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4 posted 2008-12-16 07:47 PM


Yo dear Vandana,

There you go Hon.  This is very nice.

Love Bobby

Vestibular Bard
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5 posted 2008-12-16 08:56 PM


Your deeply personal, thoughtful poem brought back vivid memories of my own departed Granny...

...thank-you.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
6 posted 2008-12-16 08:57 PM


I have a similar treasure box.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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