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norunnin
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0 posted 2008-12-16 10:16 AM



if a man could hate himself and live
i would try
but its already too hard to survive

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ethome
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1 posted 2008-12-16 12:54 PM


Too true!

Dark but thought provoking indeed.

Eric

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2008-12-16 02:35 PM


As Eric said ... so very true.  Alot to contemplate on this if one let themselves.
norunnin
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3 posted 2008-12-18 07:26 PM


if a man could hate himself and live
if a man could hate himself and give
more than he had
do you think he would be glad
or do you think that he had had
more than he could ever have
do you think he was like his dad
does it make him mad
but what was it that he had
that would make him live on
long after he went mad
before he dies is he sad

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