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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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funny thing about your photo and soul and the stealing you said might occur before another possessed you for dreams, and the momentary illusion that your eyes are really looking back at my glances are you just dressed up as a window slender sided on both sides with your depth not showing really only the mirrors on water slight of hand in the comfort of your very own gloves you laughed out loud that time back then when I built you out of dampened sand at our cove in rincon, and got my shirt wet when the tides came in too fast as you were disolving into someone's mermaid with a gravel voice never saying love words _________________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you laughed out loud that time back then when I built you out of dampened sand" that's cause you kept tickling me!!  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
It's amazing how much you can say without really saying it: "with a gravel voice never saying love words" ...fine writing, indeed |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
 Enjoyed. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
That's cuz you say it best when you say nothing at all. Enjoyed it D.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea..thanks for letting me handle your mud babe..grin _____________ steavenr, thanks amigo for the read ________________ ms muse, thank you lady friend _______________ ms gs, thanks for the eyes lady!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
silence builds the foundations through exhausting labor that holds true to the toughest of storms. Good thoughts to absorb here sir. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
are you just dressed up as a window slender sided on both sides with your depth not showing really only the mirrors on water slight of hand in the comfort of your very own gloves I think you deserve a good clear and concise answer to those questions..... Wonderful wordsmithing! Hang in there.........Great imagination. Eric |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mark..thanks for the eyes on this one guy!! _______________ ethome..thanks so much for the read |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks van |
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Callista Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 63USA |
Ahh..the one who loves too much and the one who loves not at all. Been there, caught by that tide. Thanks for sharing the lovely read. "The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ, |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
looking for sea shells she was swept away, drifting in his ocean arms. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
callista...well not really, but thanks for the read. ______________ ms indi, thank you for discovering the discovery babe |
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Callista Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 63USA |
Sorry I was off your target. I often find that many who connect to my poetry (in other places) have their own point of connection that is very different from my own. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Calli' Some of the snapshots I present here are so momentary in context that they might appear to have another intention. Consider just a split second of time and all of the thoughts that might enter that vast expanse of time...so goes my poetry. thanks for the revisit |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the write Dark Stranger! ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
AW...thanks so much |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D All kidding, innuendo and quick remarks aside, you are one of my very favorite poets on this site. Okay, one of my very favorite poets anywhere. I read your poems - every one of your poems - and I never fail to be mesmerized by how magically you use language. Thank you for every poem that you have shared with me. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ali-girl.. can I echo your thoughts please? you are so much more eloquent than me Mr Daark.. I'm echoing Ali-girl's thoughts in case you didn't hear me the first time love and  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, you make me smile a humble smile ali...it does please me to have your eyes on my word pen...thanks babe!!! __________ ms r&b, thank you ms echo.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Once again I am impressed by how your poetic creativity weaves words into images that imprint themselves so powerfully upon the reader's mind. Deeply inspiring and also daunting in a way. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..thanks so much special lady for your eyes and mind |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
missed reading you lately~~ M |
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