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Wanting More
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Wanting More |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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Wanting More I told you it was yesterday that calloused my hands... Willing to touch you, but unwilling to hold you. So, when did you see past my disguise? Was it revealed in my eyes? This part of me I wished to remain silent whispered only to myself in sleepless nights. Once, I preferred we stay strangers, Acquainted only by good morning nods with no time to manage a smile. All the while, quietly watching when we thought the other was preoccupied with mindless days, longer than we'd both like. And once I took another corridor, hoping distance would banish thoughts of you. So easy to say. Much harder to do. And now it is... Me, alone with you- Wanting more. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Pat, so good to see you posting again and so very, very good to see it on such a powerful write...if I had a hat, it would be off! Please say hi to Macy for me. Let her know we miss her youthful exuberence. (Patricia holds a special place in my heart--she introduced me to PiP when we were neighbors) |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you for the poem, there is a lot of will with this woman, may her love be blessed...There is strain too in her love that makes me thinking.... have a nice day yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Patricia - written from the heart, wish you well... BC |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Steven, and here I didn't know that connection... aren't we all glad that Patricia has come home again? Well done, gal... now may we see a bit more of you in 2009? Puhleeze???? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Patricia, welcome back!! I do hope you will stay a while! I missed you much. Nice to hear about the connection with dear Steaven. I appreciate you both very much! Your poem is so profound and exquisitely written! I will read it more than once. Love and hugs. Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A true pleasure to read you and you penned some moments that I believe many of us can relate to. Go explore the oceans without thought of losing site of the shore. Enjoyed |
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