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Vestibular Bard
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0 posted 2008-12-14 03:43 PM


The Frost
- by The Vestibular Bard

The history of the man,
Remains forever lost.
Belief in him remains,
Some fingers tightly crossed.
Perhaps some souls are saved,
But who can count the cost?
You’ll never see the snow,
If you can't survive the frost.

© Copyright 2008 Vestibular Bard - All Rights Reserved
Indigo
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1 posted 2008-12-14 04:54 PM


An epic feel in a condensed form.  Enjoyed greatly, VB!

Indigo

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2 posted 2008-12-14 05:37 PM


If this was a sign, I would buy it     So true, well done!
YoungatHeart2
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3 posted 2008-12-14 09:13 PM


Great advice.
steavenr
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4 posted 2008-12-14 09:51 PM


"You’ll never see the snow,
If you can't survive the frost."

...should be on a plaque hanging in the kitchen

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2008-12-14 11:27 PM


Vestibular Bard - first comes the frost, then the snow. And it shall pass once again. Nice write...

BC

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