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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2008-12-13 01:22 PM




Moon In Spill
~*Marge Tindal*~

~September moon
On the rise this very night
Trying diligently, to get it right
Dripping soft rays all over the sky
Wondering the very question of why
Does this happen so rarely you say?
Not repeating, forever and a day
The way things come and go
Shhh Luna, I know~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2008 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Alison
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1 posted 2008-12-13 01:41 PM


Marge

What an absolute, delightful surprise to come in and see you at the top of the page.  It's like seeing a Christmas present to unwrap, knowing the beauty that lies within.

How are you, darling one.  You are so missed and this poem is so beautiful, like you.  It's beautiful.

Love,
Alison

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2 posted 2008-12-13 01:41 PM


SO Beautiful Marge!!

I've MISSED you!!!

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3 posted 2008-12-13 02:07 PM


No need to know
just observe and feel blessed
as you are

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4 posted 2008-12-13 02:56 PM


So good to see you posting again and such a gorgeous poem!


ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2008-12-13 03:06 PM


Beautiful poem, and so very nice to read you again dear poetess.
Welcome home, and happy holidays.

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6 posted 2008-12-13 03:11 PM


What a relief to see you on here, Marge.  Yesterday morning we were looking at the full moon, and I was thinking of all the beautiful poetic pictures you'd posted.

Praying you're steadily improving healthwise, Marge.

God bless,
Rae

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7 posted 2008-12-13 03:36 PM


Our Moon Goddess is baaack!!! ~ and what a lunar treasure it be!
Words cannot express how truly happy I am to see you posting again. Your pip family has missed you oodles of strudels!

With much love and healing hugs,
Earthy One

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8 posted 2008-12-13 03:39 PM


The one and only Luna Lady. How much I have missed you. Dear, sweet friend, I do hope you are back home and feeling on top of your game.

hugs and loves, Marti


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9 posted 2008-12-13 03:42 PM


A PIP member can never look at a full moon without thinking  of Marge. You have done it again. So good to see you here. Love to you, "late"
Betty
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10 posted 2008-12-13 03:57 PM


How wonderful to see something from you.
Betty

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11 posted 2008-12-13 04:30 PM


I can't tell you how many little joyful butterflies were dancing all around inside of me when I saw this!
Oh, Marge, I'm so glad to see this wonderful poem. Thank you. Love, Barb

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12 posted 2008-12-13 04:40 PM


Yay!

-Juju

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Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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13 posted 2008-12-13 05:03 PM


Marge, I am overjoyed to see a post from you!!!
I do hope you are on the mend and feeling better.  
It's been a long hard road but I know you are one tough cookie.
With much love and many fond memories, Nancy

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14 posted 2008-12-13 05:14 PM


Yo dear Marge,

This is a good poem in a nice moony shape.

Love Bobby

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15 posted 2008-12-13 05:23 PM


Pleasingly metrical,
While exquisitely symmetrical.
Your lunar beguiling,
Has left me smiling.
Whatever malady,
In you has bathed…
Your lovely muse,
remains unscathed.


Thank-you for sharing your gifts...

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16 posted 2008-12-13 06:16 PM


Welcome back to the blue pages, dearest Marge, moon goddess!

Your moon poems are always a pure delight for the eyes and for the spirit, and this one is no exception.

So beautiful!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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17 posted 2008-12-13 06:25 PM


Lovely to see you here Marge. Beautiful as always.
                                 Ida

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18 posted 2008-12-13 06:28 PM


Saw the moon last night and thought of you~~

as beautiful a write as ever. Wonderful to read your words, Marge. Hope all is on the mend.


M

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19 posted 2008-12-13 06:49 PM


She was shining just for you Marge, because she knew you would write something beautiful about her.

Glad to see you writing dear, Muys is asking for you almost every day. I'll write to you soon.

Sending you healing Dutch hugs and knuffels.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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20 posted 2008-12-13 07:58 PM


Marge, it is grand to see your moon rising
once again ... here ... above the cybersea!

a most finely shaped 'write'!

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21 posted 2008-12-13 08:25 PM


Marge:  I am so happy and blessed to see you back at Pip.  I have been worried sick about you.  I am glad your back and am praying for a complete recovery that kept you from us all here.  The poem is beautiful and I am so happy now that I know you are alright. Love you always

                  Hugs Kimberly


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22 posted 2008-12-13 08:28 PM


glad to see you feeling better and back here with us
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23 posted 2008-12-13 09:21 PM


love the construct of this, its content, and its existential qualities--top shelf write...lovely
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24 posted 2008-12-13 09:53 PM



Dear Marge I echo Alison's thought with this on my dear, written in your usual
wonderful way. Take care, love

Lindsay

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25 posted 2008-12-13 10:13 PM


Dear Marge:

An intriguing write! I love your moon poems particularly!

Betty Lou

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26 posted 2008-12-13 10:30 PM


It's a comfort to find you here again.



and a


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27 posted 2008-12-13 10:48 PM


You know whenever there is a full moon here we actually DO call them Marge moons!  Good to see your up to posting a little something.  You take care and get better.
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28 posted 2008-12-14 12:08 PM


Dear Marge,

thanks for this write, amd like every other one, it speaks to my heart all the time. I can almost feel the tone of your voice in this poetry....like the gentle rays of the pure white luna...with much warmth.

Happy Holidays

Marge Tindal
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29 posted 2008-12-14 05:44 AM



You know ... I sat here and wrote out 22 danged THANKee's ... then the Cyber-critters got obnoxious and decided to wipe out my carefully thought out replies~
DANG IT !!

So one BIG THANK YOU ALL

Love you ALL~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

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30 posted 2008-12-14 06:02 AM


Dear Marge

'Luna' always seems so much more interesting when you verse about her!  An enjoyable poem to read! It's good to see you back in PiP!

Love Verbena xo


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31 posted 2008-12-14 10:05 AM


Christmas came early! *S* What joy it is to see you posting!
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32 posted 2008-12-14 10:17 AM


Marge, one big thanks is always a great gift!
Hoping your holidays bring joy and peace.

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33 posted 2008-12-14 10:37 AM


”You know ... I sat here and wrote out 22 danged THANKee's ... then the Cyber-critters got obnoxious and decided to wipe out my carefully thought out replies~
DANG IT !!”

There once lived a poet named Marge,
Her thanks, cyber-critters, discharged…
She was heard to harangue,
A very loud; ‘Dang!’
And instead, posted ‘thank you’, writ large.

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