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Open Poetry #43

south side knowing, north on 1

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

0 posted 2008-12-12 09:41 AM

terra cotta candle's lingering
the flicker phantom panting
without his own breezes to please
as a day in snowshoes leaves prints

rincon below the navel in her tides
the writhing woman of sand colors
I know her back better than her smile
always she is distant as if married

for money and still wanting love
but not on her skin when it shows
perhaps just under her nails
or as signature footprints afterwards

when she pretends only to my highway
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daark

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2008-12-12 10:12 AM

when she pretends to my only...

beautiful gifts, D. Thank you.

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

2 posted 2008-12-12 01:17 PM

ms sun...thanks babe!!

SEA

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with you

3 posted 2008-12-12 05:14 PM

"the writhing woman of sand colors
I know her back better than her smile"

lovely

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

4 posted 2008-12-12 05:26 PM

ms suesea..thanks babe

Margherita
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Eternity

5 posted 2008-12-12 05:43 PM

quote:
terra cotta candle's lingering
the flicker phantom panting
without his own breezes to please
as a day in snowshoes leaves prints

Such glimpses of your visions open new horizons ...

Totally mind-blowing!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

6 posted 2008-12-12 05:47 PM

ms mar...thanks babe!! you are such a special lady

steavenr
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7 posted 2008-12-12 11:06 PM

thought I had already commented on this, oh well, certainly worth reading again...my favorite line:

"I know her back better than her smile"

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

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8 posted 2008-12-13 03:25 AM

Once when I was in band camp, I won a snowshoe race. Yep, I did.

And I carry this one to my dreams.

G'nite, D.

A

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2008-12-13 06:27 AM

thanks steavenr...

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ms ali-san once when I was in snoeshoe camp I won a bandaid...thanks lil one

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