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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-12-11 12:05 PM


The weeks before Christmas,
is always a bad business time
for Bones.  

It seems like every corner
has another kid from the hood,
standing around,
looking to make a little bread
to spend on presents
for their families.  

Bobby

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2008-12-11 12:47 PM


delicate and sad, thanks

  yann

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2008-12-11 04:01 PM


Thanks Yann,

For your kind words.

Thanks especially for mentioning "delicate".

The hood is many times a tough and hard place.  However, our kids are just as delicate as kids anywhere.

Bobby

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