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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2008-12-11 11:18 AM



I am in the cash desk,
the bar code does not want to work,
the cashier calls Etienne,
can you bring me some other tomatoes,
Etienne returns with a package different
from the one that I had bought…
They are the same he declaresl…
He is smiling, proud,
looks intelligent and polite .
Regrettably at the time of eating my tomatoes
they are past their sell-by date,
he was selling off his stocks…
In spite of his politeness
he was laughing at me,
appearances can be deceptive,
business can mock people.

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-12-11 12:38 PM


Yo Yann,

Some people are just that way.  We all have our faults.

This is a cute poem.

Bobby

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