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rad802
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since 2008-04-19
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KY U.S.A.

0 posted 2008-12-11 07:36 AM



The cost in lives, and loves, and tears, and dollars.
The strategist, and hawks, and rouges, and scholars.
Ambition has made us a nation of debtors.
We can only hope the next war will be better.

We struggle for our first breath, and onward to our feet,
but really we are still only in our infancy.
From further down the block I can just make out
the echoing of footsteps from the alleyway infantry.

We are strong willed but we belong.
Scurrying to gather pieces of heaven.
We don't expect you to know this song.
Hurrying to capture hill number seven.

The past unfolds, and fades, and tears,, and crumbles.
The experts guess and blame, ignore, and fumble.
Our leaders made this slippery slope even wetter.
We can only hope the next war will be better.

We struggle for our first breath, and onward to our feet,
but really we are just learning to live in peace
As far back as our history I can still make out
the sound of war and death that hardly ever seems to cease.

We are strong willed but we belong.
As long as we can keep this planet together.
I don't expect our leaders to never be wrong.
But can't we come up with anything better?


To keep from bleeding, keep the leading
edge moving the other way... away

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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
1 posted 2008-12-11 06:35 PM


This is full of wonderful insight and passion...great write!
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