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Misty Lilacs
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0 posted 2008-12-10 08:55 AM



A phantom voice lingers
you live here, laugh here and dance here
and though you are no longer
you exist in the twinkle of the stars
and forever as a voice in my soul

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-12-10 11:31 AM


Someone obviously left you with very tender and beautiful memories.
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2 posted 2008-12-10 12:02 PM


a sentimental, nostalgic write that makes the soul yearn for hope...beautiful
Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-12-10 03:16 PM


Beautiful, uplifting thought for all of us who are missing someone.
                                   Ida

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4 posted 2008-12-10 03:18 PM


Beautiful.  
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5 posted 2008-12-11 01:11 AM


This is beautiful.

Alison

Margherita
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6 posted 2008-12-11 05:46 PM


Dear Marti, you express this feeling of interdimensional closeness so beautifully.

I feel this too ...

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Misty Lilacs
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7 posted 2008-12-14 12:37 PM


Thank you all for your replies. I did indeed lose someone very, very special to me and his life remains with me always. His anniversary is 12/22 and to this day I can't believe he is gone.

ooxx  Marti

Margherita
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8 posted 2008-12-14 06:49 AM


((((Marti))))

You are right, though we continue to feel close, the sorrow for the physical loss haunts us always.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

LindsayP
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9 posted 2008-12-14 07:47 PM



Marti that is a heart touching post my dear,
It is always sad to lose a loved one but you do have wonderful memories and that is a bonus. May God bless you. love.

Lindsay

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2008-12-14 11:09 PM


Misty Lilacs - very tender and yearning write, thanks for writing this one...

BC

Patricia
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11 posted 2008-12-15 12:28 PM


This is simply lovely.

Patricia

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