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0 posted 2008-12-09 11:31 PM



Wondrous pages

Illicit of sorts

Many the faces

Feelings do court



Conscious deep streams

Far away verse

Reality's dreams

Nightmarish curse



Chaptered for many

Authored by one

Touching souls ready

Blind eyes have shun...
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steavenr
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1 posted 2008-12-10 12:15 PM


excellent read-aloud write...loved your last stanza:

"Chaptered for many

Authored by one

Touching souls ready

Blind eyes have shun..."

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