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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-12-09 04:04 PM

Bones is on his regular corner,
waiting for a client,
any client will do.

A car drives up,
motions him over,
and asks how much.

Bones gives the client his usual fees,
and a deal is made for a night.

The client drives bones
over to a regular looking
kind of place.

The client escorts Bones inside.

“Okay Mister,
what’s your pleasure,
do you want me to
take my clothes off?”

“No,
that won’t be necessary son,
are you hungry?”

“Yeah Mister, I could eat.”

The client serves Bones
a nice hot meal
of spaghetti and meat sauce,
it’s real good,
and Bones loves it.

Bones hasn’t eaten in a while.

“Okay Mister,
thanks for the good spaghetti,
do you want me to
take my clothes off now?”

“No,
you’re kind of dirty though,
how would you like a nice bath?”

“Yeah Mister,
that would be okay.”

Bones gets a nice hot shower.
The client has clean clothes
for Bones to wear,
just his size.

“Yo Mister, what’s going on—
why you treating me so good?”

“I used to do what you do son,
I just thought you might like a break.

Now go to sleep,
and I’ll take you back
to your corner in the morning.”

Next morning,
the client drives Bones
back to his corner.

The client offers Bones
his hand.

Bones grabs the client’s hand,
kisses it,
and dives out of the car.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (12-09-2008 05:46 PM).]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2008-12-09 04:58 PM

I have to tell you, Bobby, this was an emotional read. ~ and Bone's kissing the man's hand really got to me. A simple ~ yet monumental ~ show of appreciation for that man's kindness.
God bless them both.

Linda

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2008-12-09 04:59 PM

a little kindness
goes a long way

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2008-12-09 05:02 PM

Wow

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2008-12-09 05:55 PM

Thanks dear Linda,

As Tiny Tim used to say, "God bless us every one".

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2008-12-09 05:57 PM

Thanks dear Helen,

Yes, what you say is true. A little kindness does go a long way.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2008-12-09 05:58 PM

Thanks for the "WOW" dear Juju.

Love Bobby

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

7 posted 2008-12-09 07:40 PM

It's great to hear a happy ending to Bones's story, I'll bet that doesn't happy very often. Good write Bobby.

Lindsay

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

8 posted 2008-12-09 10:53 PM

Thanks LindsayP,

No, I'm afraid it doesn't happen very often. However, it does happen every once in a while.

I'm pleased this one worked well for you.

Bobby

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