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Arius Miura de Galdri
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0 posted 2008-12-09 09:28 AM


"The Truisms of Love"

I've heard it said that Love is blind
If that, my dear, is true
I'd rather never see again
Than be away from you

If loveless life is like a flow'r
That never comes to bloom
Then spring shall never end for me
Nor sunshine turn to gloom

And should I come to lose my wit
Because of Love's design
I'll live in blissful ignorance
Just knowing that you're mine

AMdG

"My candle burns at both ends; it will not last the night; but ah, my foes, and oh, my friends--it gives a lovely light!"  -Edna St. Vincent Millay

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amusemi
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A State of Disarray
1 posted 2008-12-09 09:35 PM


This is very smooth and very lovely...kat
Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-12-10 02:56 PM


Some poets just know how to do romance, well done, Arius.
                            Ida

Arius Miura de Galdri
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since 2007-07-04
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Michigan, USA
3 posted 2008-12-11 07:53 PM


Thank you very much!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I wrote it for my fiancee, and she was quite taken with it too, so I guess that means "job well done"!

AMdG

"My candle burns at both ends; it will not last the night; but ah, my foes, and oh, my friends--it gives a lovely light!"  -Edna St. Vincent Millay

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