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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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I have this life Vastly different than my former self’s plans I have this love That complicates my future for anything more I stand romantically stagnant Because one love can’t overcome another’s I am alone As I choose, because love couldn’t conquer "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Good poem, short and sweet. I feel I am in the same place. -Paul Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Understood. Lovely poem. -Juju |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It would be a perfect world if love really could conquer all, for there'd be no wars, no poverty, no illness ~ and no loneliness. Love makes the world go 'round ~ Unfortunately, it is ofttimes in short supply. Love 'n hugs, Linda  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
at first, I thought, 'how fatalistic', then I re-thought, 'how realistic', and then I concluded, 'how stoic." Any write that can take the reader on that ride is well worth the read...perhaps it took me on a path not of your original design, but I certainly enjoyed it |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you all for the kind replies. Steavenr~ I think it's all of the above with the exception of stoic. I am neither free from passion nor indifferent. I only wish I were.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Enjoyed the post dear Susan. Lindsay |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Susan, Good John . |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
What is love anyhow? Something so simple becomes way too complicated you know? Yes you do |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Get out and dance Just do it you'll love it |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Love is truly over-rated as a noun, now as a verb, I kinda like it.   |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
It's so good, it hurts. A |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you friends.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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