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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2008-12-08 03:36 AM



I thought

I saw a butterfly

the corner of my eye in wing

or was the truth just fluttering

teasing

wet lashes

again?

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-12-08 05:11 AM


ooh you are way good Ms Serenity!!   love and hugs.... RDB xxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Juju
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2 posted 2008-12-08 11:43 AM


Isn't that how it always is though... everything important is seen in the corner of the eye.

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2008-12-08 11:47 AM


mine doesn't flutter, it stabs at me.



Although the truth behind the words hurt, this was still beautiful.

love you.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-12-08 11:58 AM


"I saw a butterfly

the corner of my eye in wing"

~ Karen, by looking at your luscious lashes in your photo, I can understand you thinking it was a butterfly fluttering by! lol

Love 'n hugs,
Linda

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5 posted 2008-12-08 12:00 PM


Giggles and ditto to Linda's reply!

Love the beautiful poem.  You get so much said in every single word!

- Owl

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2008-12-09 11:14 PM


Thank you.



Remind to not do this again.


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