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steavenr
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0 posted 2008-12-08 12:12 PM


thought thieves, nocturne-driven
unseen viceroys victomizing
their prey, landslides of the mind
like early spring snow fields

mix their waste in nature's haste
and thoughts like cool morning mist
in lea-scapes, lessened by presence
diluted in the strength of a rising sun

inspirations dissolving through perspirations
of perspicacity, threatenings of theft
fall softly on their unsuspecting kill
without lamenting dementia's agility

a dictionary, a rhyme, a thesaurus entry
lie vacant before these brigand letches



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1 posted 2008-12-08 01:20 AM


in currents of the river, Lethe.
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2 posted 2008-12-11 12:31 PM


Okay, I gotta say that I think you write in the most interesting way and create the most interesting use of words.  And I like that in you, Steaven.  This is very good.

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