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i_am_patch!
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since 2008-06-24
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manila, philippines

0 posted 2008-12-06 01:51 PM



"still"

im still here,do you even know?
im still holding on after all these years.
i still wake up longing to see you lying beside me.
everything's still quite the same after all.
i still cry every night,reaching out to your ghost
and nobody really noticed you were gone.
all the words i never told you,
they fill up my walls..
shouting at me..
every love i never showed you,
fill up my days with regret,frustrations,hurt.
every  moment of your life that i missed
became haunting visions,
keeping me awake for days..

in case you change your mind,
the door's still open for you
you can just walk in anytime..
i dont mind.

in case you change your mind,
the place beside me is still unoccupied
you can claim it  anytime..
i dont mind.

in case you change your mind,
your part in me is still  saved for you
you may come back anytime..
i really dont mind.

   "omnia vincit amor"
LOVE OVERCOMES EVERYTHING

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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-12-06 02:57 PM


lots of lonliness encapsulated in what might only be seen as hope

my favorite line:

"your part in me is still  saved for you"

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
2 posted 2008-12-07 01:48 AM


I agree w/steavenr, a lot of ache here.

Sometimes, though, the old love can keep you company to the point no new love can take its place.

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