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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-12-06 11:48 AM


Bones looks up,
and sees Griselda
sitting on the balcony
above the Record Shop.  

She’s up there
with other bad girls,
they’re on display.  

Just pick out
what you want,
and then come into
the Record Shop,
and arrangements
can be made.  

They don’t allow boys
up there on the balcony.

Bobby

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Gaia
1 posted 2008-12-06 02:22 PM


Balconies across the world seem to have a 'record' shop below.
ethome
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2 posted 2008-12-06 02:51 PM


I guess I came along in the middle of this story.....However, I find the subject matter intriguing.
Eric

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-12-06 04:18 PM


Thanks dear Kacy,

I didn't know that.  

I seem to learn something every day.

Love Bobby


Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-12-06 04:19 PM


Thanks Eric,

For the kind words.

I'm very happy that the stories are holding your interest.

Bobby

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