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A dream of serenity for Ms. 'Serenity B.'
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A dream of serenity for Ms. 'Serenity B.' |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Dreamwalker Way Leave behind the world of noise, phantom hopes, and empty promises. Follow the dreamwalker way of ‘spirit and heart’ into the deep Autumn forest. Lean on a cloud, and watch the rocks roll by in the last lovely light of a lingering sunset. Relinquish all fears and cares… as vanishing time-echoes in the cosmic void. --- b. e. adams [big-time fool, small- time ‘poet’ (12/5/08)] [a 'Universalist' honoring of a candlelit request!] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
that was just stunning!  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And you are a lovely, lovely man! Thank you m'friend.  Written in diamond dust!  (Yes, smile, I went off googling) smiling wide a beautiful way to end my night. I thank you.  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A wonderful poet's beautiful poem for a most deserving fellow poet! - Owl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Lean on a cloud, and watch the rocks roll by"  Yanno, I can actually see her doing just that! You've perfectly captured her, poet. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep, you did good. Most beautiful and most Serenity B. So, please don't go. xoxoxo Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely tribute to a fine lady, Bruce. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, Bruce, this is totally awesome for our dear Karen! You are inspired and inspire, Poet! Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bruce, this is quite beautiful...A quiet reading offered me suggestive deep images...enjoyed it very much. yann |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lean on a cloud, and watch the rocks roll by in the last lovely light of a lingering sunset. looking for that cloud to lean on~~ lovely writing, Bruce M |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
bruce this is beautiful for karen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful tribute to a most beautiful woman of many sides. The below lines are pure gold thought. ---------------------------------------- Follow the dreamwalker way of ‘spirit and heart’ into the deep Autumn forest. Lean on a cloud, and watch the rocks roll by in the last lovely light of a lingering sunset ----------------------------------------- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just so "Karanity." Funny, I don't have dreams of Serenity, I have nightmares!  Just kidding! Lovely tribute to a beautiful lady and friend. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
such a surreal aspect to this...again, another gem |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great words! Easy to float on..... Eric |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Bruce... I see you are still gifting us my friend... this is so very beautiful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Each line is a piece of poetic perfection. I especially adored the follow: "Follow the dreamwalker way of ‘spirit and heart’ into the deep Autumn forest." An especially spiritual poem of serenity for our Serene One.   Linda |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
"Follow the dreamwalker way of ‘spirit and heart’ into the deep Autumn forest. Lean on a cloud, and watch the rocks roll by" Wonderfully creative! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
lovely. Juju -Juju |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely beautiful! *S* We all benefit from this gift to serenity! *S* |
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