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Open Poetry #43

Of My Sweet Lover

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-12-05 06:59 PM

Of My Sweet Lover

Scrubbing her back
while in the shower
I imagine that I could
linger for hours,
up and down
round and round
taking in the pleasures
admiring the treasures
of my sweet lover.
Don't try this,
the water gets
cold...

JamesLee
05November
2008

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

1 posted 2008-12-05 08:13 PM

Oh James that sounds like one great pastime, present and future, you are a lucky fellow. enjoyed the write.

Lindsay

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-12-05 08:38 PM

that turn at the end reminds me of a road I once missed and wound up in a barbed wire fence...nice write...all of it

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-12-05 09:01 PM

Yo James,

This is good advice.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2008-12-06 05:01 AM

Hi James this is spiritful, smiles.

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-12-06 05:33 AM

Lovers don't feel cold ... they bring their surroundings, water included, to the boiling point ...

Enjoyed!
Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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