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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA

0 posted 2008-12-03 06:43 PM



What can you really understand
These problems that I face
To face the truth of who I am
The truth I soon embrace

What can you see inside my eyes
A sparkle will only show
But behind it's perfect disguise
A girl who's all alone

I can see what you see
A personality they all know
A person I pretend to be
Cuz I can't face, that I'm on my own

Why do you think this love is enough
To get through all my pain
Without my soul giving up
Or allowing my mind to turn insane

What emotions do you bare
To know that this may not last
That in the future, when I'm there
I might regret this past

What do you see inside of me
Do you blind yourself from my lies
Take a step into reality
And open up your eyes

What can you really comprehend
These issues aren't your own
This won't last unless I pretend
I'm the girl that they all know


I love pancakes!!!

[This message has been edited by freeand2sexy (12-04-2008 07:08 PM).]

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2008-12-05 06:51 PM


Nice writing...James
steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-12-05 08:33 PM


this is a very good write...filled with what seems personal pain, very well exposed, very well explained...
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