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shortsleeves
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0 posted 12-03-2008 05:13 PM       View Profile for shortsleeves   Email shortsleeves   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for shortsleeves


The Sound
Of A Snowflake
Echoes
Through Time
As It Finds
A Place
Of Peace

Frozen Shapes
Of Geometry
Transport Water
In Majestic Beauty
Filling Space
With Artistic Flair

The Simple Water Drop
Becomes
The Maestro
Of A Diverse Orchestra
Covering Life
With The Blanket
Of Energy
It Then Disappears
In A Bed
Of Mystery

Forever Present
In Conscious Thought
The Voice
Of A Snowflake
Whispers My Name  

© Copyright 2008 Hal Manogue - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 12-03-2008 05:42 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita



I simply adore this poem. Every single phrase is filled with enchantment.

In absence of direct experience recently, I close my eyes and place myself into the scene ... your poem makes it easy. Wonder filled!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

shortsleeves
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2 posted 12-03-2008 07:04 PM       View Profile for shortsleeves   Email shortsleeves   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shortsleeves

Thank you Margherita. The snow is beautiful.
Love,
Hal
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3 posted 12-04-2008 01:20 PM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Beautiful, shortsleeves. I can almost feel the snowflakes on my face.
                                Ida
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4 posted 12-04-2008 01:51 PM       View Profile for shortsleeves   Email shortsleeves   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shortsleeves

Thank Ida. I appreciate your comment.
Hal
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5 posted 09-02-2012 05:55 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

I was diving and found this magical poem and enjoyed it once again. Dear Hal, it would be a precious gift if you would come back here sharing some of your fantastic poems!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

 
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