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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2008-12-03 02:53 PM


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No
Not long
The nineteen
Of white dancers

Spring comes
And goes
And every year
The blossoms
Fall

Yuhi Hill
The drum bridge
At Meguro

A once
Beautiful
Woman
Bent over—

An umbrella
Keeping snow
Off white hair


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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2008-12-03 03:40 PM


These images are so well put together, I can't help but be entranced.

Always do more than is required of you George Patton

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray
2 posted 2008-12-03 10:13 PM


Bump!
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
3 posted 2008-12-03 10:20 PM


lovely

-Juju

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Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-12-03 11:21 PM


I am learning so much about Far Eastern art with your recent posts...and the imagery of your words matches the images you describe so well
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