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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2008-12-02 05:38 PM



She suffers
with eyes
both shut or wide,
against the night's terrain
its anticipated etchings
that cease to write
of caligraphy aborted
on the sky's false promise
its stalling clouds of bloom

the rhymes ring hollow

no accolades
on centerstage

she kneels.



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steavenr
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1 posted 2008-12-02 08:01 PM


drawn in by your exquisite title, captivated by your amazing words...going back in for more
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2 posted 2008-12-03 01:32 AM


You just seem to get better and better writing this poetry stuff, Brooklyn lady.

Alison

OwlSA
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3 posted 2008-12-03 10:58 AM


Love the poem - hate your suffering!

- Owl

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-12-03 12:45 PM


Ouu this one is a


ARCTIC WIND

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2008-12-03 02:34 PM


Michele - stopped by for a read, well done...

BC

Margherita
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6 posted 2008-12-03 03:51 PM


its stalling clouds of bloom


You stretch poetry into delectable heights.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2008-12-04 01:23 PM


You "stretched the sky" beautifully here, Michelle.
                                 ida

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