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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2008-12-02 02:44 PM


It could be said that silence reigned
between the two in just one bed
and yet if listening one could hear
the gentle tide of need rise up
and dance to rhythms of desire.  

His hand in hers began the chant,
“Sing, my maiden, now’s your chance”
and she responded moving near
propelled by words no one could hear.

She sang within her soul that night
the song of lovers everywhere
as with his lips, his breath, his tongue,
he reached through skin into her core
and brought from darkness into light
her shadowed self not known before.

But not enough she needed him
to take from her all she could give
and so he entered through the folds
to beats that only heaven knows.

She didn’t know; how could she know,
her spirit flew some time before
towards the door he opened then
for her to enter into love.

Today the maiden no more sings;
love’s not a very happy thing,
when dark again from light descends
and shadows fall and lengthen more.

It could be said that silence reigns
around the one left in a bed
and yet if listening one could hear …
the ebb and flow of heartbreak tears!

Helen / an old write


© Copyright 2008 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-12-02 03:05 PM


Some are never able to receive, some never to give. It's beyond wonderful when both are truly ready.
A heartfelt write, Helen.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2008-12-02 04:12 PM


That door will open again for you.  Probably when you least expect it to.  I have found when I quit looking for something, that is when it tends to show up in my life.  Your flow in this was smooth and natural making it a double pleasure to read.  
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