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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-12-01 10:04 AM



the color of your eyes then
when mine are closed under memories
and are looking into your wanting to again
like mirror mouthed kisses

my mind is handy to touch your hair there
the raven blond crimson or you in shadows
touching your shoulders lower than a smile
wearing only the dark side of sighs

and then something tender wet like tears
writes poems on tomorrow paper thin skin
see thru tattoos make us both uneasy, easily
like erasers without intentions to smudge

forgetting how we fit between our own lines
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daark

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1 posted 2008-12-01 10:48 AM


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This is beautiful writing.

A

1slick_lady
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2 posted 2008-12-01 11:31 AM


i love your poetry
all of it
i read every one

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2008-12-01 11:42 AM


"forgetting how we fit between our own lines"

An unforgettable line, mon ami.

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-12-01 12:27 PM


ms ali-san...thank you little one

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ms slick, mmmmmm you smile me babe, thank you

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ms midnite..thank you lady friend  

steavenr
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5 posted 2008-12-01 04:32 PM


what a captivating title, and then you treat the reader to such wonderful lines as this:

"wearing only the dark side of sighs"

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-12-01 05:23 PM


yes... beautiful!

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Indigo
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7 posted 2008-12-01 08:55 PM


untasted, unread
her heart of well-creased pages
elusive, erased.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-12-01 11:01 PM


steavenr..thanks amigo

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ms r&b, thanks lady friend


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ms indi...and you were there again
thanks babe

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