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Open Poetry #43

To You

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-11-30 07:26 PM

To You

To you
My love
I am writing this to you
Telling to you
That I still love you
I know
You are away
And I am saying this all
To you
Time flies
Without you
To you
Giving my rest to you
Giving you the best
To you
I am writing this to you
Because I want to fix
This piece of a broken heart
To you
I want you back in my life
To you
I loved you
With all my heart

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

1 posted 2008-11-30 07:32 PM

very nice, enjoyed.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2008-11-30 07:47 PM

awwwwwww

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-11-30 09:15 PM

Yo dear Vandana,

This is a lovely, and well written love poem. I like the words, and the shape of it.

Love Bobby

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

4 posted 2008-11-30 09:59 PM

A prayer and a desire. Very well done Vandana.
Hal

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