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Jaime Fradera
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0 posted 2008-11-30 01:37 PM



The Alter of Love

The alter of Love
is the sacred conception bed of Life.

And the sacred bed of Love,

where flowers bloom

and where seedlings germinate and sprout,

and where all things that are good,

all things that are wholesome and beautiful and right

is where each of us begins our life----

in bed,

at Night!
:------------)

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1 posted 2008-11-30 03:06 PM


This is beautiful, Jaime.  Very beautiful.

Hugs to you,
Alison

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-11-30 03:13 PM


Dear Jaime, you caught the sacredness of our beginnings very well in this write.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2008-11-30 04:44 PM


Hi, jaime!

"The alter of Love
is the sacred conception bed of Life."

I like your concept of love ~ and your cute little closing!

"where each of us begins our life----

in bed,

at Night!"

Smiling here! Big time!

Love & Life,

Linda

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4 posted 2008-11-30 07:10 PM


This is very beautiful.
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