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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-11-28 09:04 PM




Pretty Girl in Chicago

There's a girl
in a big City
who's so
doggone pretty
that I would
hold real tight
and kiss her
all night
everytime
she wanted
me too.
Pretty girl
in Chicago
its you...

JamesLee
27November
2008






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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-11-28 10:30 PM


ah but James, I don't live in Chicago, I live in Sydney!! LOL!!  just joking my lovely boy!  I do like your thoughts.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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2 posted 2008-11-29 11:50 AM


so sweet, lovely .

yann

Juju
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3 posted 2008-11-29 03:57 PM


Kawii!!!!!!!

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2008-11-29 03:58 PM


woo hoo
with it were me

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2008-11-30 12:17 PM


It's me? ~ Gosh, I best get to Chicago ~ FAST!!! lol

Another adorable write!


Rick
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6 posted 2008-11-30 01:19 PM


Enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.

Rick

Margherita
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7 posted 2008-11-30 02:46 PM


Ahh, James, your moments of sweet longing always inspire you to write lovely words.

Love,
Margherita

ethome
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8 posted 2008-11-30 02:54 PM


Right straight ahead James and so it is love at sight. Very nice!

Eric

vandana
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9 posted 2008-11-30 07:24 PM


good read
LindsayP
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10 posted 2008-11-30 08:15 PM



She certainly sounds some girl James but you always seem to be a lucky fellow,
Good luck my friend.

Lindsay

1slick_lady
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11 posted 2008-11-30 08:33 PM


darn and here i am flat down south

Alison
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12 posted 2008-12-03 02:02 AM


James,

Yep, this is wonderful.  Does she get to read these too?

Alison

Artic Wind
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13 posted 2008-12-03 12:42 PM


Lovely
~Enjoyed the Write!


ARCTIC WIND

Bill Charles
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14 posted 2008-12-03 02:35 PM


James - lovely, Chicago girls kiss well...

BC

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15 posted 2008-12-03 02:40 PM


somebody should be very pleased...nice
JamesMichael
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16 posted 2008-12-03 05:59 PM


Thank you Roniece, 2islander2, Juju, inkedgoddess, Earth Angel, Rick, Margherita, ethome, vandana, Lindsay, 1slicklady, Alison, Aric Wind, Bill and Steavenr for the wonderful responses...
My girlfriend will be visiting me soon,  very very soon, and I am excited...James

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