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rhia_5779
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0 posted 2008-11-28 01:45 AM


Graves of fallen stars mark the losses of a generation
Cracked and bleeding self esteem  corroded by prejudice
Crystal embers of hate sparked by open discrimination
Silenced because no one will admit their issues exist
  


Pistols glitter in the darkness stopping another heartbeat
Desperate prayers will go unanswered as another soldier falls
Tomorrow plans will be made to claim blood stained concrete
Houses guilty by affiliation won't be ready when death calls

Lines of branding hate decided the racial borders feeding the fire
Chained by the words etching the street raised as condemned
Warehoused by schools who won't let their hopes be flown  higher
Police who drop enemy gangs where their presence will most offend

Amber eyes on a scarred porcelain face are a reflection of what he will become
Bodies of the jumped won't make it into  a coffin or be remembered by enscribed  stone
Street corners held hostage by heroin- claimed by those who have pain to numb
Brothers, sisters, fathers -victims of toxic hate have untold stories never to be known.


Beauty shines in the mothers who work away their lives
Sacrificing so their children can escape being called trash
Every day,trying to show they hear the silenced cries
Sick of watching their babies step on broken glass

Silver shines on a Butterfly's arched wing flying over a doorstep
A symbol of hope that  in this world is as real as fairies
they believe in fear, and the warmth of bodies frozen in death
constantly misunderstood-surviving  a world with no guarantees

Soldiers of sapphire tears and coral colored knives
Charisma of bittersweet leaders incite battles for hate
plastic wrap strangles a targeted soldier in the night
Chained to pain- caught by death's bittersweet embrace

Running through unforgiving streets from the torture of watching a brother die
Staring at the pale pearl moon, a witnessing the harsh terms of  street law
Always being left behind,always running, never knowing when to say good bye
Crippled by silence and discrimination- life of a  Soldier of La Vida Loca


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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2008-11-28 05:57 PM


Stark and chilling imagery. I've seen few such street scenes, but the few I did see numbed me, left me wondering...why? for what purpose?


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2008-11-28 08:47 PM


Fine writing...James
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